How does this house that I designed look?

I designed this as a part of a Excessive Faculty class. I’ve no formal collegiate structure coaching. The concept is to have numerous pure mild flowing into the cathedral lounge quantity, and as you get farther into the home, the extra enclosed and intimate the house feels. I really feel like I’ve a really linear design, you begin on the entry, with single peak ceiling, then the house opens as much as cathedral ceilings in the lounge, then the ceilings decrease once more within the kitchen and eating room. Please ask questions and provides suggestions. I designed this as a part of a contest in school, through which the winner truly will get their home constructed. I acquired second place 😢. The render doesn't look nice, however hey, i'm new at these things.