Rip my final year project to shreds (recent graduate)

Hey guys,

I've lately graduated with an undergraduate diploma in structure (3 years). I've been making use of to jobs in my dwelling metropolis (London) with no success. To be trustworthy, I'm nonetheless not sure whether or not the work I've produced is appropriate sufficient even to land me a job. I’d love for a few of you to closely criticise my work so I can get a greater concept of what I'm doing incorrect.

For a little bit of context, the constructing is a museum that showcases parts of my college's metropolis historical past and appears to evoke debate. Most of the objects displayed have been exhausting to convey in a render, nonetheless, I gave it a go anyway.

I've hooked up a couple of renders. I'd like to get criticism on how I can enhance my rendering expertise and in addition the place my design is missing. In fact, my precise portfolio contains all my particulars, ortho drawings and so on.

Thanks!