Advice needed : floor plans

Hiya,

I’m a 3D artist specializing into archviz. I used to be attempting for the primary time to make a flooring plan for a private challenge (a espresso store).

I made two sorts, which one do you like and why ? Additionally, does my plan is sensible ? Any tip ?

PS : don't look an excessive amount of on the watermarks, I nonetheless need to get the professional model of Rayon

Thanks for the assistance !

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